Dad
He has black, short, shiny, hair. He is medium hight. His eyes are grey like a grey rain cloud. He always wear red or blue clothes and likes them to hang of his body. His arms are as big as a elephants trunk. His skin is slightly tan. Sometime he is mad like if he is at war. His skin is wrinkled like a maze. He wears brown or black shoes. His nose is pointy like a end of a flax.
His voice is so loud it could wake up a person. He is quite clumsy and messy. Sometime his voice is loud and serious but must of the time his voice is soft and friendly. He is very lazy and he likes to sit on the couch. He always make me laugh.
My dad works on a fish and chip shop n Masterton and he retired because he said it was too far away. He is always kind and friendly to other people. On Wednesday he goes out with his mates.
He has a red motorbike and he loves play soccer so he bought green soccer ball. He plays soccer with me at Sundays mornings. He loves sport.
Well done on your character description. I like the way you have used lots of descriptive words and similes. Your writing has given me a clear picture of your character.
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