Description:Every monday and Thursday we have writing. In our writing class we practise our goals. We got our goal by using last years writing, then we used a chart to show all the things we had in our writing. Then we looked at the area that had the least talley marks. That how we chose our writing goal. My writing goal is long and short sentences to build suspense. For this task we had to look picture(Down below) and come up with a story of what might be happening.
We used this picture as motivation
Big idea:
Feedback: I really like how you explained how you got your goal.
Feedfoward: Next time you could add more detail about your writing goal.
Evaluation:I think that overall I have done a pretty good job but I still need to work on short and long sentences to help build suspense and not just keep using the same old words to start a sentence or it gets really boring.
Mitch, I just love your creativity and the way you paint a really clear picture for your audience. Also it is brilliant that you and Liam have worked on this together, you can't tell that it is written by two different authors. This piece proves that you really are able to create suspense, Well Done!
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